tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5399383406117123449.post4702056456814509643..comments2024-01-24T09:30:54.872+05:30Comments on ज़िन्दगी…एक खामोश सफ़र: अब तो आ जा .......vandana guptahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00019337362157598975noreply@blogger.comBlogger35125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5399383406117123449.post-41518232122346168512010-03-15T07:16:22.034+05:302010-03-15T07:16:22.034+05:30प्यार की ये कैसी तडप है । विरह के आक्रोश को कोमल श...प्यार की ये कैसी तडप है । विरह के आक्रोश को कोमल शब्दों में ढालती रचना ।Asha Joglekarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05351082141819705264noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5399383406117123449.post-35585267913539129742010-03-14T12:08:26.157+05:302010-03-14T12:08:26.157+05:30bahut sundar vandna ji!bahut sundar vandna ji!Parul kananihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11695549705449812626noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5399383406117123449.post-69668467040430624562010-03-14T10:27:26.601+05:302010-03-14T10:27:26.601+05:30अब तो आ जा
एक बार!
हमको तुमसे है
बेइन्हा प्यार!
कह...अब तो आ जा<br />एक बार!<br />हमको तुमसे है<br />बेइन्हा प्यार!<br />कहीं ऐसा न हो<br />कि<br />हो जाये<br />चाहत की हार<br /><br />सुन्दर भाव.हितेष https://www.blogger.com/profile/10641999988239901845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5399383406117123449.post-19711533766112560482010-03-14T09:56:09.284+05:302010-03-14T09:56:09.284+05:30dwar par nazren tiki hain aane wale aa bhi jaa.
m...dwar par nazren tiki hain aane wale aa bhi jaa.<br /><br />man ke bhavon ki sunder abhivyakti.Yogesh Verma Swapnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01456159788604681957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5399383406117123449.post-26787006508198518142010-03-14T00:44:59.093+05:302010-03-14T00:44:59.093+05:30बहुत ही सुन्दर भाव और अभिव्यक्ति के साथ आपने लाज...बहुत ही सुन्दर भाव और अभिव्यक्ति के साथ आपने लाजवाब रचना लिखा है जो काबिले तारीफ़ है!Urmihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11444733179920713322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5399383406117123449.post-36874622959787009512010-03-13T23:01:38.468+05:302010-03-13T23:01:38.468+05:30अति सुन्दर प्रस्तुति.
बहुत सुंदर शव्दो से सजाया है...अति सुन्दर प्रस्तुति.<br />बहुत सुंदर शव्दो से सजाया है आप ने इस सुंदर कविता को.बहुत सुंदर<br />धन्यवादAshish (Ashu)https://www.blogger.com/profile/17298075569233002510noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5399383406117123449.post-46116510482738140692010-03-13T14:32:24.460+05:302010-03-13T14:32:24.460+05:30दर्दनाक अभिव्यक्ति.दर्दनाक अभिव्यक्ति.देवेन्द्र पाण्डेयhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07466843806711544757noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5399383406117123449.post-3254407518419195952010-03-12T19:52:16.698+05:302010-03-12T19:52:16.698+05:30वन्दना इतनी वेदना? बहुत मार्मिक रचना है । क्या कहू...वन्दना इतनी वेदना? बहुत मार्मिक रचना है । क्या कहूँ शुभकामनायेंनिर्मला कपिलाhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11155122415530356473noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5399383406117123449.post-26054089714483078292010-03-12T15:52:34.013+05:302010-03-12T15:52:34.013+05:30bahut hi karun pukaar...ek marmsparshi rachna...bahut hi karun pukaar...ek marmsparshi rachna...rashmi ravijahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04858127136023935113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5399383406117123449.post-59835056464350268042010-03-12T09:19:41.298+05:302010-03-12T09:19:41.298+05:30वन्दना अच्छी कविता है, लेकिन हमारी उम्र की नहीं ...वन्दना अच्छी कविता है, लेकिन हमारी उम्र की नहीं है तो हम क्या कह सकते हैं?अजित गुप्ता का कोनाhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02729879703297154634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5399383406117123449.post-33791518509969260072010-03-12T08:00:13.221+05:302010-03-12T08:00:13.221+05:30Aap nirantar ek sundar kavya sangrah ki or badh ra...Aap nirantar ek sundar kavya sangrah ki or badh rahi hain..<br />badhai...दीपक 'मशाल'https://www.blogger.com/profile/00942644736827727003noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5399383406117123449.post-88843037856646972052010-03-12T06:53:06.271+05:302010-03-12T06:53:06.271+05:30bahut sundar gahan bhav liye aapki yah rachana vir...bahut sundar gahan bhav liye aapki yah rachana virah me dil se nikali tis lagati hai ....bahut sundar!रानीविशालhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15749142711338297531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5399383406117123449.post-11305200045269040062010-03-12T00:16:00.281+05:302010-03-12T00:16:00.281+05:30बहुत ही वेदना झलक रही है ....भावपूर्ण अभिव्यक्ति.....बहुत ही वेदना झलक रही है ....भावपूर्ण अभिव्यक्ति....संगीता स्वरुप ( गीत )https://www.blogger.com/profile/18232011429396479154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5399383406117123449.post-366724463008630622010-03-11T22:48:08.371+05:302010-03-11T22:48:08.371+05:30kitna marmik chitran kiya he apne tadapte ehsaso k...kitna marmik chitran kiya he apne tadapte ehsaso ko...dil ko chhu gai..bhagwan aapki manokaamna jaldi puri kare.अनामिका की सदायें ......https://www.blogger.com/profile/08628292381461467192noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5399383406117123449.post-15343665882263841332010-03-11T21:41:50.639+05:302010-03-11T21:41:50.639+05:30Vakai ab to aa hi jaana chahiye...Vakai ab to aa hi jaana chahiye...irfanhttp://www.cartoonistirfan.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5399383406117123449.post-18963747794166292382010-03-11T21:40:23.091+05:302010-03-11T21:40:23.091+05:30Vakai,ab to aa hi jaana chahiye.Vakai,ab to aa hi jaana chahiye.IRFANhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558772132148066423noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5399383406117123449.post-45819808522243352722010-03-11T20:02:08.808+05:302010-03-11T20:02:08.808+05:30पुकार की चरम सीमा इसलिए उसे आना ही होगा - धन्यवाद्...पुकार की चरम सीमा इसलिए उसे आना ही होगा - धन्यवाद्Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5399383406117123449.post-22180248087976901002010-03-11T19:51:01.596+05:302010-03-11T19:51:01.596+05:30एक बार
बस एक बार.........
मनुहार और एहसास की यह रच...एक बार<br />बस एक बार.........<br />मनुहार और एहसास की यह रचना बहुत खूबसूरतM VERMAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10122855925525653850noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5399383406117123449.post-42492965941988246322010-03-11T19:04:08.269+05:302010-03-11T19:04:08.269+05:30... sundar rachanaa!!!... sundar rachanaa!!!कडुवासचhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04229134308922311914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5399383406117123449.post-26288976085781432592010-03-11T18:59:15.040+05:302010-03-11T18:59:15.040+05:30niceniceRandhir Singh Sumanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18317857556673064706noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5399383406117123449.post-47264567201803572912010-03-11T18:11:22.386+05:302010-03-11T18:11:22.386+05:30gahari pukar ..marmsparshi rachna.gahari pukar ..marmsparshi rachna.shikha varshneyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07611846269234719146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5399383406117123449.post-62441764058778423372010-03-11T16:51:20.411+05:302010-03-11T16:51:20.411+05:30gazab ke tadap hai vandna jee aapke is rachna main...gazab ke tadap hai vandna jee aapke is rachna main, shabdon ko ik sutra main pirone ke kala ke liye dher sare shubhkamnayenlimty kharenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5399383406117123449.post-25601559759728195192010-03-11T16:42:42.906+05:302010-03-11T16:42:42.906+05:30अहसास तो सदा साथ रहता है , अहसास के सहारे तो जीवन ...अहसास तो सदा साथ रहता है , अहसास के सहारे तो जीवन बिताया जा सकता है .......बहुत अच्छी रचना है !!Kusum Thakurhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02345756853367472461noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5399383406117123449.post-10148845928458017542010-03-11T15:30:57.667+05:302010-03-11T15:30:57.667+05:30bahut bhavnatmak kavita hai....hriday ki byakul pu...bahut bhavnatmak kavita hai....hriday ki byakul pukar hai...achha lagaIndranil Bhattacharjee ........."सैल"https://www.blogger.com/profile/01082708936301730526noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5399383406117123449.post-82393020077872347022010-03-11T14:48:23.390+05:302010-03-11T14:48:23.390+05:30fir ek sundar rachna strisahaj bhavnaon se judi .....fir ek sundar rachna strisahaj bhavnaon se judi ....Preeti tailorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09640646887751963662noreply@blogger.com